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Minding your own as you sit in the park,
reading a book, alone...
You read of romance til it gets dark,
Then pick up your things to go home.

But before you stand up,
you suddenly see,
a man step out of
the forestry.

He wears a black coat,
yet you can't see his face...
The shadow of his fedora
covers that place.

You nervously stand, and take a step forward,
to see if he needs any help.
You never knew, (how could you have known?)
you should have worried about yourself...

He pulls from his coat a little blue rose,
and you suddenly begin to blush.
"Y-your so sweet..." stumbles
out of your mouth in a rush.

You gingerly pick the rose from his pale hand,
You gasp as your cut by a thorn.
You look up and he's gone!
'He was here...' you could have sworn.

You head home with the rose,
and put it inside a vase,
and put it somewhere to
stay perfectly safe.

You think of your 'admirer'
as you get ready for bed.
Visions of him keep dancing
in your head.

Just as you turn down your covers,
you hear a knock at your door.
You blush, then scold yourself saying,
"It's my roommate nothing more..."

The next is a blur as you
open the door.
And all you remember is
feeling so sore...

You see yourself in a dungeon,
chained around your neck.
Your naked as the day you were born,
thinking, 'What the heck?'

Then steps in your 'admirer'.
Then you see he has no face!
You scream and try to run,
but the chains hold you in place.

You rue the day you took the rose,
for it was all in his plan.
For that was the day you became the bride
of the Sexual-offenderman.
Written for :iconarcanineryu: 's contest for her character the Sexual-offenderman

I wrote it because it made me upset to believe such a wonderfully malicious creepypasta could be considered "not scary."
Being raped is NOTHING to laugh at. I have never had it happen to me personally, but I know people who have. It's a horrifying experience. So, I hope you enjoy my poem. Oh, and pls comment. They make my day!

all my creepypasta poems are now being read by :iconnarusasu321: on youtube.

link to her page-www.youtube.com/channel/UCOBnv…
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:icontiiccky:
Tiiccky Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks for worningO_O 
(getting three smoke box and flint and smoke) 
me: everything we'll be ok everything we'll be ok...(thinking about offenderman) STOP THINKING ABOUT OFFENDERMAN IM SO SO
Smexy: beautiful (evil smile)
me: AHHH!!!!! (GONE OUTSIDE AND SLAM DOOR HARDER)
smexy: "sigh" what a cuties these days...
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student General Artist
You are most welcome, I hope it helps.
Smexy: It won't.
Me: Oh, hush you...
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:icontiiccky:
Tiiccky Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student Artist
Shadowkitten can you make smexy get out!!
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I can try, but I doubt he would listen unless I called Slendy.
Smexy: you wouldn't...
me(smirks): Oh slendy!
Smexy:aww c'mon, don't call that killjoy...
me:then shoo!
Smexy: psh... fine... (goes to pester trendy)
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Tiiccky Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Student Artist
Me: "enter my hand in door and give middle finger to smexy" FUCK YOU SMEXY I WISH IF YOU WERE A GENTALEMAN LIKE SLENDY!
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Priscilla19 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconpriscilla19:
Priscilla19 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np :)
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samluvsshads Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
That is amazing poetry
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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slenderpony5252 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
Love it! Your great at poetry! ( I think I spelt that wrong..)
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Student General Artist
No, you spelt it right. And thank you!
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:icondeadlynightshade97:
deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
;-;
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:iconslenderpony5252:
slenderpony5252 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Why so sad friend?
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:icondeadlynightshade97:
deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I never thought about the POV of any of his victims after they were actually taken, so that was a bit scary for me. But I liked it anyway. That's why I'm a CP fan after all! :)
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slenderpony5252 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Yep! :3
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:icontwinklestar05:
TwinkleStar05 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love poetry yay this is good
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athena185 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow awesome ur poetry better than my poetry and my poetry is depressing
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:iconthedarkliz:
thedarkliz Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr same here
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:iconmandipandi11:
mandipandi11 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hate flowers I think they stink.... so that wouldn't work with me whatsoever
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Personally, I can't smell flowers. But I like the look of them, but to each their own. Thanks for reading though.
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marybethisbest Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
omg i wouldn't taken the rose unless i was drunk
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Yeah, me either. As much as I like him, I wouldn't want to be Smexy's bride for the rest of my life. Well, maybe...
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marybethisbest Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
i agree
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ScienceNerdArt399 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True. I mean it is a horrible experience that they have to deal with for the rest of their lives. That is, if they live, sadly. Anywho, your poem was great and I liked it!
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconsciencenerdart399:
ScienceNerdArt399 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome!:D (Big Grin) 
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:iconni-tam:
Ni-Tam Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But...but the rose! The rose has to survive!! It needs fresh water...so, slendy~, can i leave, pretty please? :'D
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Sexual Offender Man: Nice try, but I brought it with me. (pulls out rose he gave you earlier.)

Me: Your a clever bastard aren't you?

Smexy: Yep!
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Ni-Tam Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But it has here no water. so rose...you have to survive! *graps the rose and stares at slendy* Roses need water. So...be happy with giving the rose! *3*
slend: wh-whut?
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Isaribi123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Very scary honestly. I would die at that thought considering I'd blush like crazy thinking I had an admirer. Very well done! :iconepicclapplz:
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! I am so happy so many people love my poetry!
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:iconkelly55106:
kelly55106 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
smexy was so smart
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes he was!
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:iconkelly55106:
kelly55106 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
i shall put him in 1 of my new storys
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student General Artist
I would LOVE to read it!
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:iconkikielzinga:
kikielzinga Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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kikielzinga Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :D :D
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GreenMute Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcutenessoverloadplz:
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconblushingplz:
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TMNTLOVER0720 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
*thumbs up*
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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TMNTLOVER0720 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Welcome! ^w^
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HOLYCRFEWDFG O.O
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:iconshadowkitten12:
shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
What's wrong?
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i need more
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shadowkitten12 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I have another creepypasta poem for Jeff the Killer, and now that I think about it, I could write one for all the others too. Would that be okay?
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
mhm
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ImperatrixTempore Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sounds a bit like the raven, but it's awesome!
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